Friday, May 10, 2013

Short Story.... Brian

Found this....  I wrote it for a class assignment; it is fiction, but I have been in similar situations...  anyone with children has probably lived through this once or twice!


My heart jumped inside my chest, pounding.  He was gone.  I barely turned around.  The sounds of the crowd and the machines blended together and fell away, all I could hear was my heart BOOM, BOOM, BOOM.  My head was spinning.  Think.  Where would he go; the giant slide; maybe the carousel?  Slowly the noises around me came back into focus; the whirling of the giant motor next to me and the laughs and screams of the children on the Tilt-A-Whirl were almost deafening now.  

Don’t panic.  I took a deep breath; it tasted of dust and smelled like French fries.  I started to run for the slide, he had really enjoyed the slide.  The line for the round up was in the way, I pushed through, running, I then tripped over a black hose.  I could taste the blood from my lip.  I didn’t even care about the dirt now covering the front of my shirt.  I got up and continued running.  Jumping the hoses and barely missing the side of the trash can, I turned a corner to the giant slide.  

The slide was full of small children waiting in line, each with an old burlap sack about their shoulders.  The stairs to the top were steep; I looked up and saw that he was not there, nor in the line of squirming kids, no red jackets.  My heart raced once again, where could he be?    I looked around, no signs of him, no little boys in red.  

I start to run once again, this time to the carousel.  I can see the horses, slowly moving up and down while happy music plays in the background; still no boy.   I turn to the little cars honking and buzzing as small boys play with the buttons and sound the sirens as they slowly turn a circle.  For an instant I think I have found him, but it is another boy, in a red baseball jacket.  I can taste the salty tears that have run down my cheek.  I didn’t even know I was crying.   

Finally, I scream, “Brian, Brian!” as I continue to wander through the kiddie rides.  I can feel the looks from parents and children as I walk through desperate and covered in dirt.  Then, through all the laughter, screaming, and machines I hear a small voice. 

“I in here sissy.”

“In where?” I yell back, to nowhere in particular.

“The bouncy” the small voice replies without worry.

I calmly walk to the little red bounce house in the shape of a chicken.  Brian’s little Diago sneakers are lying on the ground next to the bench.  I collapse against the side.  The plastic feels cool and soothing.  My head hurts.  My lip begins to pound.  I now realize that I have blood running down my chin.  He’s OK.  Everything is OK.  I am going to kill him.



Thursday, May 9, 2013

First Contact

Today, while checking on the spring crops in the front (read lilac bushes by the road)  I encountered the wolf.   He eyed me with caution and I could hear my animals getting restless in the pen.  The wolf slowly followed me as I carefully examined the leaves, checking for parasites.  The crops in the left fields look good so I moved on, knowing the wolf was watching my every move.  I checked the orchard (the one crab apple tree in the middle)  It grows crooked and this year it seems to be making some odd choices, but the leaves are clear.   I see the wolf, now closer than ever before.  He is obviously curious about me, as I am about him.  Carefully, I knelt down, moisture seeping through my jeans.  I looked at the ground and spoke in a low even tone.  "Hello there, you're a good boy."  He came up slowly, circling me.  I felt his body bump my back, knocking me slightly off balance.  I regain my composure and speak again.  "Hey,  good boy, c'mere."   I now can hear my own animals pushing at the gate, I only pray it holds.   The wolf notices too, he moves away, back toward my animals.  I move away from the pens, hoping the wolf will follow.  I continue to speak to him, luring him with me.  I get out of the line of sight of the pen and kneel down again.  The wolf investigates me once again.  He sniffs at me, brushes by me again his his body.  This time I slowly hold out my hand, palm open and down.  He cautiously sniffs my offering.  He comes in even closer and a gently reach out, patting his fur.  He is so soft, wet from the rain.  My eyes look into his.  I pat him again.  He breaks our eye contact and jogs off, suddenly.  First contact was brief, but sweet.  I know there will be more - and I can't wait.

Until next time...  write on!

Tuesday, May 7, 2013

The usual Tuesday TIVA / DENSI review....

Wow,  both the TIVA and the DENSI were hard to watch.

First on NCIS...  Ziva feeling alone in Isreal...  ARGG....   we all wanted to Tony to go with her!  It could been him that she turned to, damn those writers!  I did like the way they showed her clearly distraught over Tony's reaction to her confession.  I also loved when he called her his best friend... so sweet.  I am hoping they play up the TIVA even more in the finale.   (SHHH,  don't tell the writers, but I love their Best Friend moments even if they never get together.)

Now,  the DENSI on the other hand...  that is about to heat up.   She was clearly bothered by the undercover op that Deeks was involved with.   It wasn't blatantly clear what happened between him and Monica so I am choosing to believe he was able to be a gentleman and skirt her advances (LALALALALALALA -I CAN'T HEAR YOU!)      Anyway...   he never likes being Max and was not himself through this whole episode.  The scene in the armory, (they have a lot of their best moments in the armory lately) was sooooo...   close.   You could just tell he wanted to say something more, but didn't.  That Hetty...  at least now Deeks and the audience know that Hetty is on team DENSI!

I am going live soon with a DENSI blog (I know TOTAL GEEKDOM HERE I COME!)  I am hoping to get some contributors to do some episodes for me.  It involves a complete breakdown of the episode scene by scene. (I have some done that I could show anyone interested)   The blog will also have what I call the DENSI Factor - rating it from 1 - 10 for its DENSI content.

Here is hoping next weeks finale is at least a 9!

Until next time.... Write on!

Saturday, May 4, 2013

Iron Man 3 - No spoilers...

So,  Last night I got to see Iron Man 3.  I have been waiting for it to come out and  -  It was worth the wait! Let me start by saying I am not a fan girl and have absolutely no loyalty to comic books or Stan Lee...  so I really could care less if the movie betrayed Iron Man comic number 53 or any such argument someone out there is waiting to pounce on me with...  (though I will take the comments :)  That being said  I LOVED the movie!   I think it was the best Iron Man yet!  The movie was fun, funny, and action packed.  It had some surprises, but it was still very much Iron Man and Tony Stark.  A lot of Tony Stark actually,  which was nice.     If you liked the others, even a little...  SEE THIS ONE!

The previews before this movie were like some kind of Nerdvana.... and totally HOT leads in just about everything they showed.   So really  Girly Nerdvana!  They previewed The Wolverine,  who couldn't look at Hugh Jackman???   Thor...  Need I say more???!!!   He makes Hugh Jackman look old and out of shape!   Then it was Star Trek...  those eyes!  I will watch that movie like a 1000 times just because of those eyes...  Also After Earth,  Will Smith looking cute as ever....  the only non Sci Fi movie -  The Hangover 3 - and I have a thing for Bradley Cooper,  so  it was still a good preview.

How many of these Marvel movies do they have to make before people remember to stay until the very end of the credits?  No disappointment here...  Stay...  see if you get it.  :)

May the 4th be with you....  

Until next time... Write on!

Friday, May 3, 2013

Right Writing is the Only Right Way to Write

My writer's block may be coming to an end!  Not that I have been writing classic literature or anything, but it is getting better.  I have woken up the past few mornings with my brain writing scenes in my head.  It is mostly  fluff, but at least this head of mine is coming up with something again!  I even wrote a poem while driving the other day.  So nice to have the creative flow turned back on....  Now,  I really need to get into the habit of writing it all down.  I tell myself I will, then I wait, and then it just isn't as easy to capture it all as when it was fresh.  A lot of people say to keep a notebook with me, but I just don't write that way.  I need to keep my laptop on and ready to go.  I type creatively I guess...   notebooks are great for notes, but for my writing, I need the keyboard and screen to feel right.   I often wonder about all the gems I have lost over the years because I didn't get my lazy ass to a computer and capture the muse while it was spewing creativity all over the place.  I have chosen sleep many times, I have chosen to continue watching TV, or any number of other things.  I am going to try harder to write when my head is writing and capture whatever drabble comes forth.  I apologize now.

Until next time...  write on!  

Thursday, May 2, 2013

Hide and Seek


She shook in fear
And held very still
It took discipline
And all of her will

She hid from the others
And stayed out of sight
She hid all day
And into the night

No food or Water
No supplies at all
She stayed there though
Curled into a ball

She could not breath
No room to move
She was the best
That’s what she’d prove

Sadly for her
There was not enough air
In the old wooden cabinet
Under the stair

She finally died
Under that shelf
They didn’t kill her
She killed herself

She wasn’t too smart
She was kind of a freak
She took it too far
It’s just Hide and Seek

Until next time... write on!

Wednesday, May 1, 2013

Say what?

So,  a freind of mine had an idea of how I could garner more comments on my posts.  You see, too get more comments on my blog I need something that grabs poeple's attention and compels them to comment.  There need for justice and they're desire for everyone too no that they have greater knowledge then I have will lead them to comment like mad.  So,  I say two all of you,  COMMENT!

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Until next time...  Write on!